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I'm Freaking proud of that this time :la:
:heart::heart::heart:

so well... little scene at De la Crux castle.

you can see on the background Samantha (the blonde one) watching Maria jealous, and Lord Leonardo talking to her, without being listened, obviously...

Well... the inspiration for this draw had been the song Virgin Skies - Rhapsody.

i spent about 1 hour doing the stones of all the background X_x

but i like the effect of 1st plan lined and the background just with colors, what you think?

As usual, scanner raped colors, and for the first time ever i'd been able catch the right color tonality with GIMP.

Enjoy :)

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
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hi i come in from #Realm-of-Fantasy's critique corner. i hope my thoughts help in some way for your art.

it's a good idea to outline those two characters in front to emphasize them and to put the other two at the back without outline. that helps to create sense of distance.

i can also tell that you have put in quite a lot of effort into the stone wall in the background.
though i think adding a tint of colors to the stone wall will possibly improve the atmospheric feel of the environment.

also the facial features of your male and female characters are not distinct enough. adding fur to the chin of a female character somehow gives the impression of a mustache and it feels a little odd. you might like to give the female bigger eyes and lashes, shinier hair and fuller/smoother outline for the face.

good job for the effort put in and please keep it up. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile) - :)"/>