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Half of my Trade with ~midnight-howler1995 OwO

well, yesterday i've had a crazy Drawing Raptus and at 1 AM i waked up, with no NDS (battery empty) and no Music (still battery empty DX ) and i did all the Background XD
Well, i wanna be honest, i get lil crazy to find a good position for a fight between a Dragon and a Wolf without make the natural proposition die for scaring XD
but at the end i thougt on that OwO
So well, Mahou (the dragon) was flying happily on the hills when suddenly... O_O Matador (the wolf) ATTACKED D8 OMGGGGGG!!!!!!! BAD WOLFIEEEEEE!!!!
And that's the emergency landing on Mahou showing all the surprise xD

Hope is ok and that you like ^^

ENJOY!!

Mahou & Matador (c) by ~midnight-howler1995
Art (c) by me =Bary91

NOTE: Scanner killed, im trying fixing ^^;

Critiques


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I can see that the colours are smoothest on the body of the dragon and those floating pink orbs dotted around the dragon's body.

I'm not sure if this is the fault of the scanner, as the colours you have used are good, but maybe try using other colours to colour and shade it with, for example a shade of purple to shade the darker areas of that dragon's belly, or a hint of blue for the darker areas of the wings and body. There doesn't seem to be any shadow underneath the dragon and that little fox/wolf like creature, so I think you should go and add that in.

On to the background, the grass that is closest to the viewer is good but as you move out, the grass looks a bit like long fur instead of grassy strands, so you should pay a bit more attention to keeping drawing the grass as strands than fur - and again, try using other colours to colour with.

So, main things to improve on, shadows and using different colours to compliment the current colours you may use to...colour with xD But also practise a bit with backgrounds :)

I hope you find this helpful :)
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:iconmidnight-howler1995:
aww thank you so much! it rocks!
:iconretrogoldfish:
WOW that is AMAZING, you are truly a BRILLIANT artist, i love how it came out :D

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If it wasn't for the gutter my mind would be HOMELESS ;)

Remus Clessi Saxonic :heart:
:iconchimera-girl:
Dai Mahou schiaccia quella pulce di lupo! :iconanimefaceplz: :iconthank-youplz:

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"Senza sacrificio nn c'è vittoria"
cit. by Transformers The Movie

"Autobots! Transform...and Roll Out!" - Optimus Prime
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"Super Robot Monkey Team Hyperforce Go!"
:iconkestanesus:
Nice! That's pretty awesome, the poses look great. :D
:icondragonfire767:
I think you did really well with the poses, and I like the colors as well. ^^

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Hi. I'm Cara. I love to draw dragons, and I think penguins are evil communists that are trying to take over the world. :crazy:
:iconbary91:
Awwwwwwwww really?? *w*

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Insane Deviant here :crazy:
:iconbary91:
really? xD
i quarreled a lot with them xD

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Insane Deviant here :crazy:
:iconbary91:
xD
bhe date le dimensioni non credo che abbia problemi xD

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Insane Deviant here :crazy:
:iconbary91:
naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i just like draw :blush:
and thanks ^^

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